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Roots and vines grow through her,
Her mind has been here far too long.
Searching for some pacification,
In a world she does not belong.

In the insects she finds comfort,
And the leaves weave through her hair.
Her face lies under foliage,
But she no longer requires air.

Beneath the dirt she is shapeless,
The cold satisfies her placid skin.
Away from life's bombardment.
Away from the howling wind.

The forest smells decayed,
The nights grow so cold.
She tastes autumn on her tongue,
Like a history left untold.
Winding into the woodwork, stuck in a world you shouldnt exist in.
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DancesWithShadows Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012   General Artist
Strangely reminds me of myself. :XD:
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static--death Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha, I'm glad someone can relate. :psychotic:
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DancesWithShadows Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012   General Artist
Pffft. I can relate myself to a pine cone.
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static--death Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha! Unique skill I must say. :p
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DancesWithShadows Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012   General Artist
:eyes:
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WednesdayWhite Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As I read this I pictured a girl slowly becoming a tree! Your writing makes my brain trip out! :ohnoes:
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static--death Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks man! I'm glad you said that, because that was my original intention of the poem. I wanted to title it this scientific word for when vines grow into objects or the disease when people get those bark-like growths on them. But I decided it sounded a lot like a girl who got murdered and buried and so I went with that. :psychotic:
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WednesdayWhite Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AH! Great minds think alike! :)
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skull-king Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
:O Me gusta! Very powerful, you can sense the complacency, and or hurt within it.
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static--death Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks man! I appreciate it, a lot went into this one. :) I dig writing third person, too. It comes easier to me.
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