Collaboration with my boyfriend . Makeup was designed and applied by both of us the other day. Photo edit and model are by me. Kind of futuristic tribal... not happy with most the shots I got though. :\ There was actually a lot more to this photo... my hands are painted in black paint, with red splattered everywhere and my nails are painted red. My body is painted red, and my hair is in a pony tail sticking straight out all wound up in wires ha. Enjoi!
I love the makeup and the composition, however... why are the eyes so soft? I think this may be front-focused a bit. I can see pores on the tip of the nose, but the details in the eyes are very soft, you can't even see the veins in her left eye. The eyes should be crystal clear in this shot. It really ruins this for me. When working with a shallow depth of field next time focus on the iris, not the bridge of the nose.
Thank you for the feedback, yes that actually irks me a significant amount, too. I originally wasn't even going to post this shot because of that. I was taking these photos all by myself using manual so it was extremely difficult to get a clear, focused shot. I will definitely keep that in mind though. Thanks!
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